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seanrodrigues
10-07-2009, 08:10 PM
Hello, I'm a new member. I'd love some hard critiques on my female combat suit.
Disting
10-07-2009, 08:51 PM
Really cool concept! I like the look of the armour, but I don't like the breasts.
I'm sure they are stylized by choice, but maybe make them a little bit more natural?
Also, isn't her torso very long? Somehow she feels a bit unproportional.
Anways, great work so far!

Keep it up, looking forward to seeing updates! :)
seanrodrigues
10-08-2009, 07:09 PM
Cool, thanks for the critique. :) I'll make some fixes then post.

Sean
SkyWay
10-08-2009, 08:33 PM
Heh, it's the law of unclothed female armor covering their nipples but not much else :)

Apart from the things Disting mentioned I find it very good, looking forward to the finished version
Disting
10-08-2009, 08:37 PM
Heh, it's the law of unclothed female armor covering their nipples but not much else :)
Hehe, is that the same law that states that the more high level an armor in an mmorpg is, the less it covers the females' bodies? lvl 1 = rags, lvl 70 = bikini. ;)
SkyWay
10-08-2009, 10:02 PM
yes, that it is : P
seanrodrigues
10-09-2009, 03:20 AM
Wow, cool. thanks guys. I made some edits to the breasts; made them softer. I re-measured the torso and compared it to the legs. I kinda like the proprstion of her torso. It is roughly the size of her thighs. The shins are a bit longer than the thighs.

I'm kinda stuck trying to figure out what kind of detailing should go on the armour.
I need to do more reasearch.

Sean
seanrodrigues
10-09-2009, 03:33 AM
Just wanted to show the front and back.
Disting
10-09-2009, 05:43 AM
That looks a lot better! :)
Are you going for a worn and torn armor look, or a straight-from-the-factory armor look?

Keep it up!
seanrodrigues
10-09-2009, 09:55 PM
I think a staright from the factory look would be cool. A war torn armour might be too much to look at.


Sean
Kosai106
10-11-2009, 07:12 PM
Well, you could always make 2 versions if you got the time? ;)
Looks neat bro!
seanrodrigues
10-14-2009, 08:15 PM
Hello fellas, what do you think about these colors?
seanrodrigues
10-14-2009, 08:17 PM
I think that's a good idea. i think I'll try making two designs. a worn and clean look.

Sean
Disting
10-14-2009, 09:08 PM
Very nice update.
It's definately getting better and better! :)
seanrodrigues
10-15-2009, 04:05 AM
Here is another pass. Please feel free to criticize the suit.

Sean