Hello everyone, wanted to have an updated version of my Senior Project for my first post here so here it is. Still a lot to do but its getting there. Making this with MMO standards and trying to make all textures myself using traditional as well as digital media.
Thank you in advance for your comments.
You've got the models down. They look good.
What I don't really like atm are the colours. They're kinda all over there place and in your face.
Try toning them all down a bit and let them meet somewhere in the middle.
You have the pale walls meeting red, and almost orange furniture, and I'm missing the in-betweens.
Also, I think an ambient occlusion pass would look good on this.
Keep it up, looking forward to updates!
On the model side, the scale seems funky ( :r&r: ). Looking at the bed vs. the chair, it's clear nobody could fit in the latter, and compared to the chair, the shield and especially the axes are mammoth. I'm not really feeling the textures in general, except for the floor and the helmet.
Disting - Will do, thank you.
Kaskad - The chair is suppose to be around 50cm wide will take a look at it since it might have changed when I scaled everything to meters. The shield and axe are actually for a creature, the same one the helmet is for.
Some textures are still from when I was making this with a kids-teen MMO feel, will tone down the saturation or remake some if necessary. Thank you for the comment.
Oops, been forgetting to update thisWorking on a door for my scene at the moment, textures are WIP still but it looks like I learned a thing or two from my last pieces of this project.
Added a occlusion pass as well as desaturated the textures for most models. on the main scene as well. Maybe I'll redo the textures since I learned a few tricks since I did most of those. I think some are still from when this was suppose to be a MMO for kids with high saturated colors.
Different shot with fixed lights as well as some scale problems that were there.
The biped scale is 180cm since I wanted to see if a tall person would fit on all of these.
Started to re-texture my models since there are some with the first saturated/happy textures still. So no more rated E i guess, hehe.
WIP of new texture for the shelves. There were a few issues with the UVs that are now fixed, no more orange-ish wood, more defined decorations since last ones looked smudged due to the UVs.
When back to the door since it needed a handle. Changed the specular for the metal since all of it had high spec instead of only the edges.
Next up: That pillar that was UVed on a different scene ^^;
Looking better and better!
You considered rendering an occlusion pass? I think you'd be pleasantly surprised.
Thank you.Originally Posted by Disting
Looking better and better!
You considered rendering an occlusion pass? I think you'd be pleasantly surprised.
These are just to show my teacher my progress. No occlusion pass on these for now, will definitely do so for the final presentation though. Will post the now newer versions later today, off to sleep for now to be ready for class.
Sorry for the delay, didnt expect to be so busy during the weekend.
Trying to make it a morning/evening scene again so it makes sense why the candle is lit. Still a few more texture to redo or modify, teacher likes where its going though. Gonna need to replace the nib of the pen sooner than I though at this rate, hehe.
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